第一段四個(gè)句子,第一句宏觀描述圖畫(huà),并談圖畫(huà)看似可笑但發(fā)人深思.第二句寫(xiě)出圖畫(huà)最強(qiáng)烈的視覺(jué)效果,第三句是主題句,談?dòng)枚畟€(gè)單詞的爆發(fā)力句型談該現(xiàn)象對(duì)個(gè)人的發(fā)展和進(jìn)步有破壞性,并引發(fā)思考,第四句是用貶義詞批判這個(gè)現(xiàn)象是強(qiáng)烈的指責(zé)。
第二段七個(gè)句子,首先第一句從宏觀上談這種現(xiàn)象的總的有兩到三個(gè)點(diǎn)危害或者原因,第二句談這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的第一個(gè)危害,用 “not only, but also”的五星級(jí)句子,通常是談對(duì)個(gè)人身心健康的危害性, 第三個(gè)句子談第二個(gè)危害,通常是用一個(gè)豪華級(jí)的比較級(jí)的句子,讓老師耳目一新,通常是談這個(gè)現(xiàn)象對(duì)社會(huì)的危害.第四個(gè)句子談對(duì)家庭或?qū)W校的危害.第五個(gè)句子談一個(gè)代替 “for example”的十五個(gè)單詞的好句子,意思是說(shuō)沒(méi)有更好的例子來(lái)證明正如下文.第六個(gè)句子是例子群體的出現(xiàn),談根據(jù)一項(xiàng)調(diào)查表明,80%以上的人只要從事經(jīng)歷過(guò)這個(gè)消極的現(xiàn)象一定會(huì)對(duì)個(gè)人在精神和生活上有危害.最后一句話(huà)是預(yù)測(cè)趨勢(shì)的二十五個(gè)單詞的鉆石級(jí)的句子,談以下預(yù)測(cè)趨勢(shì),表明這種現(xiàn)象再這樣下去,就會(huì)導(dǎo)致惡劣的結(jié)果出現(xiàn),甚至是毀滅性的后果。
第三段六個(gè)句子, 第一個(gè)句子是下個(gè)結(jié)論,談解決問(wèn)題的必要性.第二個(gè)句子是第一個(gè)建議談的是加強(qiáng)立法懲治這個(gè)現(xiàn)象,第三個(gè)句子談提高人們的覺(jué)悟關(guān)于著這個(gè)現(xiàn)象能提高人們對(duì)這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的覺(jué)悟.第四個(gè)句子談個(gè)諺語(yǔ),談一下實(shí)踐我的建議的重要性.五個(gè)句子談解決的任重道遠(yuǎn).第六個(gè)句子是解決問(wèn)題之后的美好的未來(lái)。
第一段
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, ，which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, ，(3)Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主題 which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity. (4)This phenomenon of 主題 should be condemned severely or made illegal. (5)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
中間段落從兩方面論證問(wèn)題的危害，并舉例論證，預(yù)測(cè)危害的趨勢(shì)
(1) To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward. (2)To begin with,主題 not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than主題 to contradict with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主題 to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. (5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . (6)According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主題will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something.
最后一段要強(qiáng)調(diào)解決問(wèn)題，談的兩點(diǎn)建議通常是提高人們的意識(shí)，加強(qiáng)執(zhí)法
(1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent主題. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something. (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
積極有利型的文章
第一段談的是三個(gè)句子,第一,二個(gè)句子都是在描述圖畫(huà),第三句子這個(gè)現(xiàn)象對(duì)社會(huì)發(fā)展的積極的現(xiàn)象,第四個(gè)句子是圖畫(huà)簡(jiǎn)單,寓意深刻.
第二個(gè)段子,第一個(gè)句子談一個(gè)十二個(gè)單詞的爆發(fā)力的主題句,第二個(gè)句子談這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的永恒的社會(huì)含義,用一個(gè)三十五個(gè)單詞的鉆石級(jí)的排比句子,談只要有這個(gè)現(xiàn)象就可以讓我們不斷有意義的事情,征服挑戰(zhàn)和競(jìng)爭(zhēng),并最后走向成功.第三個(gè)可以從反面談如果沒(méi)有這個(gè)積極現(xiàn)象,人們生活就憂(yōu)悶,有挫折感,無(wú)前進(jìn)動(dòng)力,前途渺茫.第四個(gè)句子談?dòng)袃蓚€(gè)大的好處.第五個(gè)句子談第一個(gè)好處,通常是讓生活豐富,有效率.再談第二個(gè)好處通常是談一些個(gè)人發(fā)展或社會(huì)進(jìn)步的好處.第五個(gè)句子是代替for example的五星級(jí)的句子.第六個(gè)是具體的舉例子,談根據(jù)一項(xiàng)調(diào)查表明,80%的人只要利用這個(gè)積極的現(xiàn)象就容易改變?nèi)松?提高素質(zhì).也可以單獨(dú)舉個(gè)性例子,第七個(gè)句子是倒裝句子談只有這個(gè)現(xiàn)象才能讓我們成為社會(huì)的成功者
第三個(gè)段子首句 談二十五個(gè)單詞的超豪華的句子,談無(wú)論做大事還是小事,無(wú)論做難事還是容易事,都要這個(gè)積極現(xiàn)象.第二個(gè)句子談?dòng)袃牲c(diǎn)建議讓它變的更好.第三個(gè)句子談讓它變的更好的第一個(gè)方法,通常發(fā)揮它的好處,避免壞處.第四個(gè)句子談第二個(gè)方法,第五個(gè)句子談個(gè)諺語(yǔ),第六個(gè)談解決任務(wù)的任重道遠(yuǎn).第七個(gè)倒裝句談只要有這個(gè)積極現(xiàn)象就會(huì)享受一個(gè)美好,豐富和有活力的未來(lái).
文章以團(tuán)隊(duì)精神為例子
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述圖畫(huà)).(2) The most striking feature is(圖畫(huà)重點(diǎn)信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
(1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重復(fù)上面的圖畫(huà)信息) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. (3)If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency. (5)Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (7)A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. (8)Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.
(1)From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. (2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. (3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. (4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. (6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.